For SuperCrit my approach was to have as much to show as possible, I tried to present all my ideas so I could see what might work and what may not for the final outputs. I wanted to present a mockup for a book and a model as well but I didn’t have time – however I am still quite happy with the amount that I managed to get done for this moment, it was a good push.
Overall the feedback was quite positive – people loved seeing the back and forth of the ai/human and found the whole concept of the project very interesting and exciting.
The video was quite successful, it seemed to explain the process well and was engaging to watch. The only problem was just in terms of focus – it was hard to stay focused on two things happening on the screen at once, there needed to be more of a split.
Notes from feedback (before tutor advising session)
- Give AI more rules/constraints? Narrow down to more of a theme?
- VR Experience?
- How can we tell that it is a collaboration from 10m away before – make it easily and explicitly clear.
- Performance aspect to the end display? drawing during etc, showing it in action.
- Installation could be more interactive/less still
- Is the relationship symbiotic or parasitic, that changes the relationship
- Hard to focus on both parts of the video, didn’t realise notice/pay attention to the text in the top left.
I thought these were all quite good points and things that I need to work on/consider. I especially like the idea of considering how I can make the collaboration more clear – I would like it to be very obvious before even reading anything that the artwork was done by two ‘artists’.




























































